Angels don't need to be explained Planets and galaxy layout can be introduced during the story not shown before Princess Anne Robbery occurs during the witch hunt executions Knights should be allies in order to reduce the number of battles The building of Legoland town / any of the cities / red star stadium or blue falcon shipyard do not need to be explained the eagle one disaster is unnessessary the creation of the vehicles does not need to be explained Eagle looks out of place in Legoland Town - doesnt' need to be shown there Cloning Facility / Research Lab / Medical Centre / Robot Lab / Computer Centre / Comms and Library can be the same place - the scene is the skaylor massacre Do I even need there to be a cloning facility? Can't they just be the Yellow Planets? Vigilante were captured red stars not the children of raped red stars The large dish is owned by Clones for communication - not a force shield generator How each race contacted each other and traded ships and resources does not need to be explained in much detail the illness of the blue falcons and bionic surguries are not important the story of the plague doesn't need to be told Don't need the rally as the dune bug is the Hawkia scene legoland mayors murder /coastguard rescue and legoland fire is unnessessary the diner should be encorporated into the monorail scene KEY SCENES: 1 Castle Battle (Including Robbery of Princess and Rescue by Forestmen) 2 Legoland Town - Just going about their business 3 Rocket Transporter & Large Communication Dish 3 Yellow Planets Lab - Skaylor Massacre 4 Blue Falcon Shipyard 5 Space City Space Port 6 Red Stars Stadium 7 Skaylor Circular Charging Bays 8 Monorail Scene 9 Hawkia Scene 10 Vigilante HQ 11 Battle at Red Star Territories with AT-AT & Ground Defense Laser Cannon 12 Flight Training School 13 Vigilante Snow Tank + Robot Deployment Ship